I don’t often re-write scripts until I’ve given them some play time to judge the effect. That being said, when I re-read my slut mantra script, it seemed to me I could do much better.Since the wife is visiting her family until the New Year, this seemed to a good time for the editing and production of a revised version. This is the only script I intend to play, unless past issues we have resolved come back into play. Anyway here it is:
i was created, to serve my husband.
God created me, for my husband’s pleasure.
I was born, to be my husband’s, sex slave.
i serve my purpose, when i’m filled with his cock, bathed in his cum.
Let me serve you Master!
My body. belongs to my husband, to use for his pleasure.
i am most pretty, when i’m covered in his cum.
My greatest pleasure, is fucking, or sucking my husband’s cock.
Please fuck me, Master!
My purpose, is to serve my husband’s desires.
My husband, is my master, I belong to him.
My purpose, is the service, and the pleasure, of my husband.
i am available, whenever, wherever, however,He wants to use me.
i am most pretty, when covered, with my husband’ cum.
my mouth’s main purpose, is sucking his dick, and swallowing his cum.
i am designed, by God, for my husband’s pleasure.
Thank You, for investing Your time, in training me, as your perfect wife.
I like it. You took out most of the degrading parts.
I think the slut mantra on its own without editing, would cause a girl to be insecure about herself if made as a subliminal. I am not sure how a girl would react to that, but insecurity usually brings about strange behavior. Tweaking it like we did taking out the most degrading parts and leaving in the important ones should yield interesting results.
Yeah I agree. It’s appeal to me is the complete, unconditional surrender, for lack of a better word, “spirit” of the text. It appeals to the view I hold of how right marriage is portrayed in the Bible, thus I can defend it in “real time” as it were.
The first draft was done kind of on the fly, which probably wasn’t advisable, as I missed a lot of things that upon re-examination could have been done better. So any newbies reading this, learn from my mistake. Carefully consider, and get feedback on your scripts before you subject your wives or girlfriends to them.
