Jesus as Lord file

[tonguester4_69]

12/07/2013 at 2:31 pm

I said I would post this so here it is. I make no apologies for the subject matter, however any criticism of structure in terms of relaying the message are welcomed.                                          Jesus is my Lord.                                                                          Jesus is a good Lord.                                                                    Jesus gives me all that I need.                                                        I am thankful for his love for me.                                                                                                                    I express my thankfulness all the time.                                       Jesus knows what is best for me.                                                   I am obedient to His will.                                                          Obedience to Jesus brings peace.                                             Obedience to Jesus brings joy.                                                    Jesus has given me to my husband Ted.                                         Jesus has made Ted responsible for me.                                         I am responsible to obey my husband.                                          Ted is responsible to lead me.                                                      Jesus works through Ted to lead me.                                            I need Ted to lead me.                                                                  I need Ted to care for me.                                                               I need to obey my husband.                                                       Obedience to Ted brings joy.                                                       Obedience to Ted brings peace.                                                     I am thankful for Ted’s love and care.                                                                                                                                I need to show my thankfulness.                                                   I want to show my thankfulness.                                            Jesus is a good Lord.                                                                    I will praise Him daily.                                                                   Ted is a good husband.                                                                                        

[eldrin81]

12/07/2013 at 3:30 pm

Sounds good. Perceived pressure from religion, peers, family, and society are all good motivators for subliminal change from what I have seen.

[Tap]

12/07/2013 at 10:10 pm

I like it. If she takes Chrisitianity seriously, it would be effective.

[tonguester4_69]

12/08/2013 at 3:50 am

She says she does, I guess we’ll see.

[Fizbin]

12/08/2013 at 11:33 am

I like it! A lot.

It does leave it open as to how she expresses that thankfulness, but maybe she’ll be creative on that one…

Stimulating lots of ideas for me.

Let us know how things go, and keep up the good work!

[tonguester4_69]

12/08/2013 at 5:41 pm

I appreciate your thoughts guys. Fiz something you mentioned before has been niggling on my mind, the voice of God idea. I’m thinking my next project will be such a file. I’m thinking a file constructed constructed of almost completely bible verses,leading to proper wifely behavior. For instance “let the wife be subject to her husband in everything” implies giving the husband control of everything.That is one of my wife’s complaints is that I take care of everything, and only allow her to express her love through sex.

[eldrin81]

12/08/2013 at 6:17 pm

tonguester4_69 said:

That is one of my wife’s complaints is that I take care of everything, and only allow her to express her love through sex.

That’s a woman thing. They see love expression through primarily sex as shallow or overly simplistic. They feel like there should be more to the relationship. And certainly there is, but guys are wired differently and express and receive love PRIMARILY through sex and physical touching, which is why it is so important to us.

You see it as this wonderful feeling you get from your wife when she pleases you physically, that proves and shows how much she loves you, because it makes you feel so great.

She sees it as, “Is this all I am good for? some physical whore for his whims?”

Alot of it is societal pressure and norms of a sexually repressed society.

I read an article once by a French woman who laughed and said that Americans should be having MORE sex, not less of it. And I couldn’t agree more. We have all been taught, women especially, that sex is this dirty thing, and giving it up too much to your husband makes you a slut/whore/property.

They see it as lessening their worth, when in fact it does the opposite. They should embrace what they are, a beautiful sexual creature, who can fill their man with joy with but a sexy dress, or simple sexual act.

On your side of course, talk to her, and reaasure her through action that she does mean more to you than just sex, but that sex is very important to you.

An article I read once by an author posited this differing Hierarchy of emotional needs for men and women:

Men

1. Sexual Fulfillment

2. Recreational companionship

3. An attractive spouse you can be proud of. (Ie dressing feminine and sexy)

4. Domestic support

5. Admiration

Women:

1. Affection
2. Conversations
3. Honesty and openness
4. Financial commitment
5. Family commitment

After reading this I can see this makes perfect sense. I am not a Christian, but truth is truth no matter its source.

https://bible.org/article/trash-your-marriage-8-easy-steps

[tonguester4_69]

12/08/2013 at 6:36 pm

Yeah, I’ve had my wife say all those things. And your right, for all that society claims to be empowering women, sexual desire is still looked down on, especially if you’re married. I see the hurdle is breaking through this mindset of sex being dirty in marriage. In some ways being Christians has made that even harder. As if by being Christians, we can’t enjoy a robust sex life.

[eldrin81]

12/08/2013 at 8:55 pm

Women are not empowered. Society, media, feminists etc claim to empower women, but all they really do is engineer their unhappiness.

They delude women into following their ideals like sheep.

Womens magazines have more mention of sex on the cover than any guy’s magazine.

It always talks about being naughty.

Those same magazines then publicly shame women for showing too much skin (in THEIR opinion)

or some other risque behavior.

Lots of crazy Religious authorities pushing their own agenda, not God’s, shame women and men both for exploring their sexuality. Calling frequent sex an addiction, or shaming the use of sex toys, kinky behavior, or porn usage in what anyone talking to those same folks would see as a fairly healthy relationship.

Feminism and modern females, Stereotypes hammered to death by comedians and sitcoms have engineered the ideal that the woman is the head of the household, and the man is simply another child who is selfish and cannot function without her.

While shows like Roseanne portray this strong female who can be respected in many ways, except the treatment of her husband, modern day women fail to achieve even that. Using their perceived Alpha status destructively and in abusive ways, manipulating their men toward selfish goals that only realize the short term happiness of the woman. This woman then self destructs in a downward spiral, as she secretly longs for the man to be in control and be assertive. She tells as much by the men she is drawn towards in media and magazines, yet engineers and conditions her husband to be nothing more than a lap dog.

Movies portray fictional men, who are ripped and buff, yet have pretty hair and eyes, and are both masculine and sensual, both aggressive yet gentle, and generally set up a perfect ideal of what a man should be to a woman, that while okay to strive towards, creates an unrealistic expectation in many young women that their man be EXACTLY like those fictional characters.

I have seen numerous women comment how they wish men were more like Thor, or one of the lead male roles in a classic disney animated film.

They allow themselves to be led astray by idealistic, photoshopped photos of women whose form while pleasing to the eye is unachievable by most women.

Most of this is just women missing the point. Having an perfect ideal to strive towards drives growth, but becoming upset and disillusioned with not being that exact perfect ideal is destructive, and causes them to lash out, or give up altogether.

Women are famous for saying one thing, but really wanting another. I always take a womans word with a grain of salt unless it is backed up by her actions and body language. Guys can do this too, but it is rampant in the female gender.

[eldrin81]

12/08/2013 at 9:08 pm

All of this presupposes that women from hundreds or thousands of years ago, who submitted to their husbands, were somehow powerless. They were not, they found power in their submission. They uplifted their men and swelled their egos with by embracing their submissive sexuality. And those men so filled up by those womanly charms reciprocated great rewards on those women. And made those women feel feminine: pretty, delicate, worshipped, admired. and the cycle went back and forth.

Of course their were cultures who were more matriarchal. But those still embraced the feminine qualities of the woman. Those cultures evolved around that ideal. Our modern culture has traditionally been patriarchal, but the shift of women to power has for some reason been to abandon their feminine qualities and shame those that embrace them and their bodies.

It is as if women these days, want to BE a man, but when given such power, wield it as if a child wielding a gun, clumsy and awkward. This has in my opinion created a cycle of deadbeat fathers, who leave their children unaware and unprepared for filling the role that they should as men, leaving them to struggle with it all their lives, power struggle with their females, and/or give up and be relegated to beta male status, only to have those Alpha females seek out the attention of one who can truly tame her.

I read a book once that talked about how women are attracted to bad boys because they want to tame an untameable man. It drives them and fills them with excitement. But yet, should that ever occur, she is left feeling empty and unsatisfied.

[Tap]

12/08/2013 at 11:57 pm

That’s pretty much true. It’s why us as men have to be the alpha in the relationship and make her the beta. The submissive subliminals get her thinking in that direction, but it’s also up to us to act more alpha.

In my marriage, I’d say in the beginning I was more 50/50 as I thought we both should be equal. As such, I gave in and allowed her to make many decisions that I should have been making. As a result, she went out with her friends leaving me at home, I would clean the house more, and we argued a lot.

My views changed early this year on how I should act and be toward her, and the subliminals have facilitated her change while my own subliminals have facilitated my change. Now she doesn’t go out without me or without my permission. I make the decisions. She cleans the house and takes care of our child, while I sit and watch TV, and she serves me dinner.

If you want to be the man, act like the man. She will follow.

[tonguester4_69]

12/09/2013 at 5:21 am

In the discussion of the modern woman, I neglected to make any comments on whether I’ve noticed any changes. I believe that at least with regard to her faith it is having an affect. It’s been playing for about 2 weeks now, and she has recently confided that she is trying to establish a habit of prayer before she starts her day. Also, she been asking questions as to how I conduct myself in my faith, as, unless I insist otherwise she prefers not to pray or read the bible together.I could insist of course, but to my mind she would then only be doing it because I make her, so she would stop the first time we have an argument.To guys who haven’t been with the forum since I began posting,  I think you should know, when I started I was only interested in having my wife behave in  a certain way to please me. It has since morphed into something else entirely.Now it is more about setting things in our marriage according to what I believe is God’s design.

[Fizbin]

12/09/2013 at 11:29 am

I cleaned up the lines, and put a token where the Husband’s name should go.

Jesus is my Lord.

Jesus is a good Lord.

Jesus gives me all that I need.

I am thankful for his love for me.

I express my thankfulness all the time.

Jesus knows what is best for me.

I am obedient to His will.

Obedience to Jesus brings peace.

Obedience to Jesus brings joy.

Jesus has given me to my husband {NAME}.

Jesus has made {NAME} responsible for me.

I am responsible to obey my husband.

{NAME} is responsible to lead me.

Jesus works through {NAME} to lead me.

I need {NAME} to lead me.

I need {NAME} to care for me.

I need to obey my husband.

Obedience to {NAME} brings joy.

Obedience to {NAME} brings peace.

I am thankful for {NAME}’s love and care.

I need to show my thankfulness.

I want to show my thankfulness.

Jesus is a good Lord.

I will praise Him daily.

{NAME} is a good husband.

[tonguester4_69]

12/09/2013 at 1:27 pm

Thanks! i can never seem to get it to post that way for me.I’m kind of self-taught in all my computer skills, so I really don’t know how to compose properly.

[eldrin81]

12/09/2013 at 2:15 pm

If you want to be the man, act like the man. She will follow.

Correct Tap. But you know as well as I do its not so simple. I too use subs on myself to reinforce manliness. I have been the assertive type for awhile now before all this subliminal stuff, but there are times when I become hesitant and doubtful of myself, and when that happens it happens for lengthy periods of time. I attribute it to society’s images, and my own wife’s attitudes conditioning me and wearing me down.

I really believe every male here can benefit from subliminal programming as much as their wives, to the effect of maintenance atleast.

[tonguester4_69]

12/23/2013 at 12:04 am

It’s been just about a month since I’ve been playing this script. There’s been no dramatic changes with her. As for sex I’ve assumed the attitude of not taking no for an answer. She has never really said no, although she is not always “in the mood”. Changes have been that we do what I want, whenever we are together. I had a very frank talk with her today, regarding her getting an attitude when I talk to her about things she both should do and should not do.For example if I tell her to turn off the tv when I come in from work, she tends to get very defensive.I also talked to her about her weight issue. She is currently around 250 pounds, and I told her there’s no reason she could not lose 50 pounds this coming year.I have also told her that I will continue to insist on this, and as my wife she ought to willingly cooperate with me in this goal as well as any others I may set for her. This is all based on the basic tenets of this script mainly that I AM her second Lord, and that God works through me for her good, to lead her into His will for her. She agreed that this is the way it ought to be, although she also admitted that it scares her, because of how passionate about things. I will keep a journal here regarding these things mostly with regard to her attitude when I do insist on things.

[Tap]

12/23/2013 at 12:18 am

You could consider a subliminal focusing on weight loss to help in that area.

[tonguester4_69]

12/23/2013 at 12:29 am

I might do that. One thing I neglected to mention is that I re-recorded this script using Qwerty’s 90Hz Nyquist prompt. It doesn’t seem  to affect the delivery of the script, and I figure if it improves her overall mood why not?For now I want to continue to focus on forming the habit of her willing cooperation in whatever I tell her. If she does that, she may not need a weight loss script.

[tonguester4_69]

12/23/2013 at 12:37 am

Even though we spoke at some length about her need to lose weight, I made it perfectly clear that it was not the only issue she needed to accept my direction about.In fact I proposed , and she agreed that she ought to accept whatever direction I give her, as long as it does not contradict the Bible. Still, agreeing an doing are two entirely different things , so we will see what happens.

[Fizbin]

12/23/2013 at 11:35 am

The receptiveness to your direction is a good start, at least. Good luck with your next phase!

[eldrin81]

12/23/2013 at 2:31 pm

@tonguester4_69 said:
Even though we spoke at some length about her need to lose weight, I made it perfectly clear that it was not the only issue she needed to accept my direction about.In fact I proposed , and she agreed that she ought to accept whatever direction I give her, as long as it does not contradict the Bible. Still, agreeing an doing are two entirely different things , so we will see what happens.

Help her out, outside of subliminals. Study’s have shown that the human brain can only resist temptation for so long, before it ‘runs out’ of willpower. Its like the brain has a limited currency for resisting things.

– So remove any and all junk food from the house. Chips, snacks (except maybe plain/salted mixed nuts, or apples, those kind of snacks are fine) ice cream.

-Get her to stop drinking soda altogether or atleast switch to one made with splenda. Get her to drink water more often.

-Find a good tasting protein powder, and drink 1 or 2 scoops before a meal. This will satiate her and she will eat less. Eat off smaller plates.

-A meal should always have about a fist sized portion of some starchy/carby food, and about the same amount of meat, and veggies(green veggies, corn and potatoes fall under starchy stuff). For mixed meals just eyeball what each ingredient takes up, but aim for less.

-Tell her to eat until her hunger has just barely gone away, not until she is ‘full’.

-Get her to start walking,briskly, for an hour every morning, on an empty stomach, water only. She needs to walk fast enough the whole time that her heart has to beat faster and she has to breathe faster, but she doesn’t need to break out into a run, nor should she with the weight she has, she will just bang up her knees. This will burn alot of fat. Unfortunately cardio can also make one hungrier, so have her slam a protein powder drink after the walk, and before meals if her hunger increases, to help combat the illusory need to eat more.

Proceed slowly, introducing behavior in, but don’t try to make too many changes all at once or they won’t stick. Take baby steps and change one little thing each week, or as weight loss starts to taper off. The above are simple things that anyone will do. Initially there will be some weight loss, some of which is going to be water weight. Take your bathroom scale with a grain of salt, and don’t weigh her more than once a week, as the body’s weight can naturally fluctate day to day, hour to hour. The goal isn’t really weight loss its fat loss. A tape measure around her problem areas to measure circumference is a far better metric, as well as how she looks in the mirror, how her pants fit, etc.

Here’s some more advanced things you can try as weight loss tapers off, keeping the above behaviors in place, hopefully by then they are routine.

-If you can, have her take up a strength training regimen atleast twice a week, it should be simple, but she will have to get over the initial soreness training brings, that can be a big hurdle. A machine workout consisting of 3 sets of 10-15 reps done in a circuit(moving from one exercise to the next, before doing set 2 or 3) with about 30-60 seconds of rest between each movement. Try to find the following:

Incline chest press, Pulldown, Leg Press, some sort of ab machine, some sort of machine for her lower back. Also have her do Planks, an exercise done with elbows on the floor, pushup position, where the goal is to keep your body rigid and straight for time.

Some other dietary regimens, that are more advanced. Find out which one works best for you.

-Take up fasting 1 day per week, 2 if you are feeling frisky. Its hard to do at first, but teaches you how to deal with hunger and does alot of things hormonally. If done right, it can really help reset her mind and body. However find a good book about it and proceed slowly.

-John Keifer’s carb nite is awesome. Its a low carb diet with one cheat night a week. Read the book though because its more complicated than that. His associates also released a new low carb recipe book as well, so no more ‘I’m bored with low carb’. Besides you get to eat carbs once a week anyway.

[tonguester4_69]

12/28/2013 at 9:05 pm

 I appreciate all the advice offered.Serious dieting and exercise routines will have to wait until she has a physical on 1/10.he asked me about this a couple days after our discussion, and I told her as much, but in the meantime, she should start doing some things to start, by cutting out some things she knows are bad for her.The only thing I’ve really noticed is she has stopped putting cream and sugar in her coffee. But at least she”s thinking about it. Weight loss script- I’m formulating one right now, that I hope will not only help her lose weight, but increase her libido.I will post it for everyone to get their opinion when it’s done.Hope everyone had a happy holiday.

[tonguester4_69]

01/01/2014 at 12:29 pm

It’s been a week since I’ve posted,so I thought I’d share a few things that I’ve noticed over the past week. We had a very pleasant Christmas Eve together shopping for a few last minute gifts. I was in the fence about bringing her along, as she had worked ’till midnight the night before, but decided I wanted to spend the day with just her. I woke her after I was sure she had gotten enough sleep and told her I wanted her to come with me. In the past this would have been greeted with grumbling, but on this occasion, she got up right away dressed herself nicely and off we went.                                   Last night(New Years Eve) we had a nice evening together, with my giving her a massage followed by sex. The odd thing was when we were all done and she was ready for sleep, she said, “Thank you Master!”, in a half-joking way.She’s never done that. I’ve playfully gotten her to call me master, but this is the first time she’s ever done it on her own. It’s not in this script,but it is a concept I bring up in relation to marriage often. lso she has in fact already lost some weight, although it’s not really clear how much.I have no idea what any of this means, but one thing she has been making clear to me is that she believes that I love her and am looking out for her best interests, which is in the script.I guess we’ll see where this leads.

[Tap]

01/01/2014 at 5:45 pm

It’s obvious your script is working pretty well. Adding a line about you being her master might solidify that concept.

[tonguester4_69]

01/24/2014 at 4:56 pm

Just realized its been awhile, so thought I’d post an update. Things are continuing pretty smoothly. I had a Qwerty type incident the other day, where she heard part of a file before I had run it through Nyquist. She didn’t really say anything at the time, but mentioned it yesterday, while we were talking. I took the opportunity to try to get her on board with using subliminals, even reminding her she had agreed to letting me play them for her. When all was said and done, I told her that I was playing files to help break her mindset with regards to sex, and she was going to have to trust that I was looking out for the best interests in our marriage. She said that she did trust that, so it’s kind of a breakthrough, in terms of her treating her as her lord like in this script. The best part about it, is I don’t have to hide anything anymore, even though I’m not telling her what’s in the scripts. She knows they’re playing, and accepts and trusts my judgement on the content. Something I’m wondering about, and maybe someone as some experience with, is having her record the scripts I write in her own voice. Would they be more effective for her if she was hearing her own voice literally? Something to consider. For now I feel much better that, while she’s skeptical, about subliminals she’s not fighting me on it, and it’s out in the open that I’m using them. She does NOT know that most of her submissive behavior is the result of the ground work I have put in using Trainer’s subliminals, combined with talking to her about about God’s design for our marriage. This has been a long road for me, as I started about 2 years ago on here. I don’t know how far it will go, as it seems that with every success , the goal posts get moved. No matter how good things are, they can always get better, and I don’t want things to get stale.

[eldrin81]

01/24/2014 at 8:02 pm

Probably better in her own voice, but then again she has gotten used to the other voice as her inner self, a seperate conscience that knows best, so maybe not. Plus you run the risk of her objecting to some lines and putting on the brakes. Does she know you write the subliminals yourself? If not she may be under the impression these subliminals are written by some professional psychologist.

[J66R]

01/24/2014 at 8:31 pm

If she’s really willing to accept that this is for the good of the relationship, I think this could be very fortuitous.

I do think it opens up the option to use her own voice, which I think would be much more well accepted than another voice. I don’t recall if you are using sledgehammers or not or using multiple person perspectives like first, second, third person phrasing. But if you are this could really open it up to be very powerful.

This may be over thinking it but I’m thinking something vaguely like this:

her voice in first person script vocalizing the acceptance of God’s authority and willingness to do anything he asks
A man’s voice representing God vocalizing the command to accept your authority
your voice vocalizing the acceptance of the responsibility to rule wisely or some such
her voice in first person script vocalizing the acceptance of Your authority and willingness to do anything you ask
your voice vocalizing the required action
A man’s voice representing God vocalizing the command to accept the required behavior is what he wants
her voice in first person script vocalizing that she will obey with all her heart, mind, might and strength or what ever commitment language is meaningful to her
A man’s voice representing God vocalizing his acceptance of her obedience as a covenant between Her, You and Him and expressing his being pleased with her.

Like I said this maybe a bit long winded and detailed. It’s how my wife would probably accept it in this situation, all broken down to the details. Your wife might need more verbiage or less. YMMV so to speak.

[tonguester4_69]

01/25/2014 at 5:54 am

I’m using only single voice files. I’m using the 90Hz nyquist setting though. It does really seem to make her a much more mellow person.As for objectionable material using her voice that would be one that I’d really have to be careful to take it slow. When all is said and done, I’ll probably have to wait awhile to go there.

[tonguester4_69]

01/27/2014 at 4:23 am

The weekend is over for us, as my wife is working tonight, and I have to say this past week, and especially this weekend has been the best that we’ve had in a very long time. I want to be clear, on a scale of 1-10 our marriage has been at a 5 or better consistently for a long time. We both consider that this week was a 7 or 8. She has been consistently, considerate of what I want, not only acting respectfully, but voicing her appreciation for the thing I do. Her submissive side seems to have really kicked in. It seems like bringing the fact that I’m using files to train her out into the open, and her accepting that I’m using them, was a major breakthrough.She has known for a long time, what she needed to do to make me happy, and was simply holding out. Knowing that I’m using subliminal files to affect her mindset, seems to have given her the excuse she needed to surrender.She really has adopted a mindset, that what i want is important to her. I gave her some really serious positive reinforcement for her behavior today, to make sure she knows I appreciate the effort, although she says that she wasn’t really focusing on it , she was just a lot more relaxed this week. The 90Hz nyquist effect? I’m still a little hesitant to say this file has done it’s job , and that these changes are permanent, as I expect a little bit of a backslide, but I’m still pleased with where we are at this moment. in my mind the big test will be when I ask her to wear a over the top slutty out fit for me around the house. if this trend continues with no back slide I’m working on a new file for her, addressing her caring only about what I think concerning her dress, and behavior which I’ll post separately.So we’ll see how this week goes.

[Fizbin]

01/27/2014 at 1:11 pm

Congratulations!
I’m using a variant of this script as the opening for my “gifts” file. I hope mine is as successful.

[J66R]

01/28/2014 at 4:20 am

Geez tonguester!
That is some profile pic.
I don’t know if you recently changed it or not but it comes through full sized.

Actually it is quite a delightful sight!

But seriously, I like the sentiment that is “written on” her “breast”.

[tonguester4_69]

01/28/2014 at 6:43 am

Thanks! I just uploaded it today. The writing is from Song of Solomon.

[Fizbin]

01/28/2014 at 11:00 am

I’m not sure if you’ve resized the profile pic, but I can’t read the inscription. Could you post the text?

[tonguester4_69]

01/28/2014 at 4:47 pm

Sure. it says, “My Beloved is unto me as a bundle of myrrh, that lieth betwixt my breasts.”I did resize it afterwards,as it was taking up too much space.
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[Fizbin]

02/15/2014 at 9:23 pm

I took your file and tweaked it a bit…

Jesus is my Lord.
Jesus is a good Lord.
Jesus gives me all that I need.
I am thankful for his love for me.

I express my thankfulness all the time.
Jesus knows what is best for me.
I am obedient to His will.

Jesus has given me to my husband {name}.
{name} is my only true husband.

{name} is the best husband I could ever have.
I want to be the best wife for {name}.

Jesus works through {name} to lead me.
I need {name} to care for me.
I need to obey my husband.

I am {name}’s helpmeet.
Caring for {name} is my top priority.
Submission to {name} brings joy.
Obedience to {name} brings peace.
I am thankful for {name}’s love and care.

I need to show my thankfulness.
I want to show my thankfulness.

Jesus is a good Lord.
I will praise Him daily.

{name} is a good husband.
I will praise Him daily.

I Love my Husband {name}

My husband takes care of all my needs.
My husband is my master.

My happiness comes from pleasing {name}.
I need to please my husband sexually.
Sex with {name} is an important part of my life.

I give myself freely to {name}.
{name} owns me.
I give my body in love to my husband.

I am a good submissive wife.
I give myself completely to {name}.
My first duty is to please my husband.

I try to be a better wife every day.
A good wife hugs her husband.
I will do anything to please {name}.

I was born to be a housewife.
I need to be a good girl for {name}.
It feels good to please {name}.

Jesus saved me through {name}.
{name} is the best husband I could ever have.
I need to be the best wife for {name}.
I owe everything to {name}.
{name} is my whole world.

[eldrin81]

02/15/2014 at 10:47 pm

Looks good Fizbin, it’s a bit long, but to each his own. I assume helpmeet is a term the wife understands toungster?

[tonguester4_69]

02/15/2014 at 11:04 pm

Yeah, it’s pretty common term in Christian community.Haven’t compared Fizbin’s to the original yet so will look at possible changes later.

[Fizbin]

02/15/2014 at 11:17 pm

@tonguester4_69 said:

Yeah, it’s pretty common term in Christian community.Haven’t compared Fizbin’s to the original yet so will look at possible changes later.

The first part is pretty close – just a little different spin on some of the ideas in language I’m more accustomed to. The additions pick up on some of the specific improvement areas I’m looking for.

[tonguester4_69]

02/15/2014 at 11:20 pm

This is a file you’re making for your use then?

[Fizbin]

02/16/2014 at 2:47 am

Thinking about it, yeah.